Short Story: I Own Your Life

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Nana travels to Uganda from India on the invitation of an old schoolmate and things start going down hill and fast on her right from the moment she steps into his house. Many bad things start to happen to her and she starts to do some very bad things herself to survive. What is in store for Nana? Read on ...


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Nana was surprised at the modernity of Entebbe International. From what she had heard and read about Uganda, she barely expected to find any tarmac on the strip let alone the automated baggage carousel. She spent less than seven minutes at the immigration desk just as Patel had promised.

Thinking about Patel, she smiled. The guy had promised her so many things she had started to worry he was telling lies, so seeing some of his promises come true was a relief. He had promised her a high paying job as director in one of his companies, a chauffeur-driven car, a house with a live-in maid, a gardener and an armed guard 24 hours a day! All that plus a salary that would translate into hundreds of thousands of Rupees. She was so excited she feared she would pass out in ecstasy. She did not know what LSD heaven was but she felt she was experiencing something very close to it.

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Adam West Guest Editor said "I think Jay's comments highlight a problem with your story. If you are serious about writing for others (being published) then you need to 'know' your readers. Porn never, and erotica rarely, cross-over into mainstream writing. So maybe have a good think about what it is you want to achieve and how best to approach writing/revising you work, best wishes..."
2 years ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thank you, Mr. West. I will definately learn from my errors and change my ways. Thank you for taking the time. Bless!"
2 years ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "Thank you Jay. I originally wrote it for `quick fun` on FB but have now managed to write ten episodes. I am thinking of collecting them at some point and turning them into a full length so I will make sure I listen to you diligently as I re-write. Bless!"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "No doubt the light porn will engage some readers, but I found it distasteful. That aside this was a fast-paced, event-full adventure, which certainly had me gripped, and I do want to know how it pans out; I wish the more intimate details of sexual encounters could be played down, but they were mercifully brief, and I think the plot is good enough for me to put up with them..."
2 years ago

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