Short Story: Hope's Rainbow

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Lesa Clarke


When April showers pass what's waiting at the end of the rainbow?


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Thump, thump, thump, thump. My footsteps echo on the soft ground as I pound them into it. Trying to regulate my breathing I force myself on, weaving through the trees, don't trip, one fall and he'll catch up. Water drops on my head, clothes cling, wet trainers, slippy soles, soggy socks. Keep going.

Sliding into the pit, the cold, cloying mud envelopes me. Reaching up to my armpits, like treacle it holds me, resisting my attempts to push on. It would be so easy to stop, sink further down into this bog. He's behind me now. I can hear him groan as the mud seeps through him. Holding my head up, wiping the mud from my eyes I lift heavy, weary legs, forcing knees to bend and feet to travel. I feel his hand on my shoulder but he's too late. I've reached the bank and haul myself out, the mud sucking…

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Jay Leffew said "Thoroughly enjoyed wallowing with them, feeling the strain and fierce determination. Exhausting. Good stuff!"
1 year ago
Lesa Clarke replied saying "Thanks Jay. That's what I was aiming for, so very pleased to read your comment."
1 year ago
Fran Strahan said "The struggle for life. Great story, good luck and Best Wishes from another newcomer to all this. Have fun!"
1 year ago
Lesa Clarke replied saying "Thanks Fran. It's a lovely site and really enjoying it."
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles said "The struggle was so real. As is most of life. Well done. Patsy Liles"
1 year ago
Lesa Clarke replied saying "Thanks Patsy. Some people who went through this particular struggle inspired the story."
1 year ago
Lesa Clarke said "Thanks Diane and glad you liked that line."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I agree with Adam it would be a shame to spoil the ending so I will just say that I love that line that Hope is at the end of the rainbow. Thanks for this - Diane"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "I enjoyed this - not sure what I can say that is not a spoiler - I will say many thanks and good luck though, as this is a excellent idea/composition - Adam."
1 year ago
Lesa Clarke replied saying "Thanks for the positive comment Adam (my first on the story and on joining the site)."
1 year ago

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