Short Story: Hell's Forecourt

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Inspired by the magic of a snowy Stockholm, this dark tale of young love and deception has all the ingredients that make folk and fairy tales so timeless. The annual witches' Sabbath fills the residents of a Scandinavian village with fear. With good reason as it turns out for Marta and Micke.


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It was the dark time of the year when the women gathered.

The time when the daylight peters out not long after three o’clock and the temperature plummets.

The time when mothers hustle their children indoors and huddle around the fire, dreading the whisk of broomsticks in the air above, capping their chimneys to stop unwelcome visitors flying in when the smoke flies out.

They wait in the candlelit safety of their parlours, eyes smarting with the wood smoke that cannot escape, keeping watch until the women have departed for the devil’s banquet, and the trolls have followed them, grabbing at the birch twigs of their brooms.

The men return from their work, bolting the door behind them and telling their wives about the strangers they have seen in town, the women with wild hair and glittering eyes that promise pleasures behind locked doors, then harden, as they turn away uncourted.

They talk in hushed voices, fearing that they will scare their children but wanting…

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Patsy R Liles said "So well written! I could not be interrupted before the end. Full of symbolism, the delicacy of life. Love and loss, grief and pain. This is not my favorite genre but I did enjoy Hell's Forecourt immensely. Patsy"
1 year ago
Philippa Cowley-thwaites replied saying "Thanks so much for your kind words, Patsy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm currently on a writing course in Oxford and had a great session from Philip Pullman yesterday - all about myth and legend! It's a genre I'm just beginning to work with so I'm glad it resonated with you. Philippa"
1 year ago

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