Short Story: Happy Birthday, Baby

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A TWIST-IN-THE-TAIL


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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BABY

Mira studied the gift she had just wrapped. It looked beautiful in the brightly coloured paper with the blue ribbon and perfectly tied bow. Opening the dressing-table drawer, she hid the present under the items of clothing. She smiled as her gaze settled on her husband’s birthday surprise. Everything was in its place for the evening she had so carefully planned.

Just then she heard her husband yell from the lounge, "Hey, come here, and make it snappy!"

And, as always, Mira obeyed. She’d learned a long time ago not to argue with Jacques. Her footsteps echoed on the hard wood floors as she headed for the front room of the house.

"Yes, what do you want?" she asked.

Jacques turned his wheel-chair around to face her; an expression of excitement on his face as he asked, a little breathlessly. "So, tell me, I can’t wait. What did you get me?"

Mira leaned down and placing each hand on the wheel-chair’s armrests, replied,…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Oh dear what a set of unpleasant characters this lot were. Unfortunate circumstances to be sure but not a lot of love lost anywhere was there. Very well written with just a touch on a couple of serious subjects to mull over later. Well done - Diane"
8 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Hmm, I agree, this is quite an unpleasant story, but these kind of relationships do exist in reality - nasty as it is! I think when I wrote this I had watched a horrible insert on the news, nothing do with the story, but some awful crime statistics in my country. And again, thanks for reading and commenting."
8 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Well, It's a fact that they can't all end as we might fondly imagine, and bravo for that. This was an ugly story, and very well written, with, I reluctantly concede, a smidgin of black humour, if you care to look at it that way. Well done."
8 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Again, thank you Jay, for your comment. ANd you're right, it is an ugly story - I agree with you and also happy to see you got the bit of black humour! My humour is somewhat dark and wicked!"
8 months ago

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