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Essay on 'perversion'


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Sodom and Gomorrah are held up as examples of what God will do to places which have become 'too corrupt'.

Again we are talking about man's own interpretation of what is 'corrupt'. I have this notion that if something is doing no-one else any harm, then it's entirely up to the individual what they do with their own lives, and it '...ill behoves any of us to talk about the rest of us...'

Smoking and getting drunk, for instance, are both likely to hurt others besides the individuals indulging them. The wonderful Roy Castle, with more talent than a whole theatre-full of diverse people, died of lung cancer when he'd never smoked a cigarette, because he was in night-clubs where the atmosphere was thick with others' smoking for most of his life. This wouldn't happen now, would it? Yet there are still people who think it's funny to blow smoke in your face; still people who think their home is a place…

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Adam West Guest Editor said "On the whole, Jay, I comment on style, story construction, characterisation, language, phrasing, anything that has to do with how we write. Generally I don't comment on the subject matter, so for instance with this essay, I did not feel obliged to comment as you were stating opinion and constructing an argument to support that opinion. I don't agree with some of your arguments but in terms of how you used your skills as a writer to express yourself I think you did pretty well."
2 years ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "I whole-heartedly applaud D.I.Y. It was one of my favourite hobbies until about seven years ago, and I still manage a few unstrenuous things, like sewing 'nappies' for bitches in season, but I really miss the outdoor stuff I used to do so much of."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "I thought I would add that I am not comfortable discussing theological issues, Jay, because I don't feel knowlegeable enough about any of the major religions and also because I don't have a God. I count amongst my dearest online friends, a Buddhist. She has told me a bit about the online Buddhist community and some of the (at times) chaotic debate that takes place. I imagine there must be similar messageboards/forums for all the major religions where an essay like yours would no doubt provoke some interesting discussion. I wasn't around when you posted because I was busy trying to fathom out how to fix coaxial aerial heads to coaxial cable and split an existing aerial using a Y-Splitter. That makes me sound very technologically minded. I am not. I am just the poor so and so who gets lumbered with the job of trying to save money by not calling in an expert. On this occasion I was succesful and saved myself about £60! All the best, Adam"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Thanks... I thought I was talking to myself when I put in that remark yesterday. All I really wanted to know was whether anyone resonated with any of it, and I'm happy with this bit of feed-back. Thanks again."
2 years ago
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Jay Leffew replied saying "See, I know the system shoves things together, that's why I use a string of dots to separate things...........separate lines don't make the poetry, the content does, and as I said before, there's some really lovely poetic prose; it doesn't need to be put on separate lines to accentuate it..."
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Jay Leffew replied saying "Why it bothers you so much that I find 'open' Poetry uncomfortable I'll never know. I've tried it myself a couple of times, and came to the conclusion it was just prose put down on separate lines. A lot of prose can be very poetic. Besides, I don't ever recall saying it was 'wrong', just not as challenging as metered verse; - I have in fact commented on the telling words used, and given a high mark to quite a few of these 'poems', and would of course do the same for Yeats; - 'Tread softly' is beautiful, but it is poetic prose put down on separate lines........... I say what I feel; - maybe that's my latent autism coming out, but as long as I don't start launching into violent invective and becoming insufferably damaging, I don't see that I should be 'got at' for it...........P.S. It's too late for any hope of saving 'gay', or 'fairy' from their fate as homosexual nom-de-plumes, but I have to tell you that I think Homosexuals are some of the loveliest people I've met. The dislike of using their real title stems from the days when they were hounded for their 'perversion'. Thank God those days are gone, and they can be themselves, as Blacks, and many other such once persecuted factions also can... I've had a lot of smiles over your reactions to me, but it is growing too childish, can you give it a rest? Please?"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "Over forty people have read this, yet none have had the courage to comment..."
2 years ago

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