Short Story: Giant Steps

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Willie Douglas


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May 26th Formula 500

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Harmonious musical jazz notes ricocheted off of the towering skyscrapers surrounding Baker Street. Heming Plaza was where the local bands and musicians that were selected to showcase in the Jacksonville, Florida Jazz Festival jammed with the legends of Jazz: Sonny Rollins, Spyro Gyra, Kenny G, Chick Corea, and the great Patti Austin. Thousands of enthused fans, some slightly intoxicated, grooved to the music, blaring through supercharged amps, amidst the tantalizing smoky aroma of grilled food and fried sweetbreads.

Before it was cordoned off by police, one did not want to get caught alone at night on Baker Street. Twenty-seven year old Howard Peter Jennings, known as Fast Pete, lived there. And it was atop his home that the Swingin’ stage was built. When announced that his hubble, several layers of plywood and cardboard boxes, would be demolished, it did not unnerve him – relocating was as natural to the homelessness as breathing…

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Christopher James Rushton said "even though short, i somtimes had to re-read bits to make sense. maybe it's the american thing."
3 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Christopher! The 500 word limit competitions makes it very challenging for writers to, get it all in, so to speak. Thanks for reading."
3 months ago
Kyle Stead said "You wrote about jazz and when I read this story I hear nothin but jazz. My only complaint is the Kenny G reference."
7 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Lol! Thanks for reading, Kyle."
7 months ago
James McEwan said "Inspirational in many ways, homeless is not helpless.. a excellent read."
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Thank you so much, James."
11 months ago
Maysam Kandej said "I enjoyed reading this! Thank you, Willie. And Good Luck :)"
11 months ago
Willie Douglas said "Thanks Suzanne! I find it so challenging to incorporate all the dynamics of a short story in so few words; I feel that I bomb at most of these F500's by emphasising too much story and not enough creativity. Thanks again."
11 months ago
Suzanne Mays Guest Editor said "This story seemed so real and I wished I could have heard them. Thanks, Suzanne"
11 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Brilliant - loved it to bits. Thanks - Diane"
11 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "I was really pleased to get the picture, isn't it funny how sometimes things just come together. There are lots of barges on the canal just around there as there are two pubs quite close together !!!! but we had never had one before with a musician on it. It was quite a lovely moment really and just had to be recorded for posterity, I wonder what the chances would be of the saxophonist seeing the picture and finding out he's been immortalised in stories."
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Thanks, Diane. You mentioned in the caption of the photo that the song was Baker Street, so I wanted to infuse that detail somehow - thanks for submitting the photo and I am glad that they chose it for this competition."
11 months ago

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