Short Story: The Canopic Jar

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Susan visits her sister and reveals a shocking discovery about her...


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Susan let her fingers touch each symbol and her hands gently glided over the object that stood before her. Her fingers were meticulous with each movement and examined each little nuance in the chinks that had been etched in this nonconformist structure. It was almost as if she was feeling for something different, something new. Although she’d been here many times, she couldn’t help but read the hieroglyphic inscription once more, fashioned to be her sisters’ final epitaph;

"For Stella, life never dies".

Ordinarily, she would marvel at its beauty. The gold of the quail chick and the bronze of the lion had a very precise look about the work carved skilfully into the black granite headstone. It stood out to make Stella’s final resting place gleam and seem majestic. In the garden of the dead, there was a touch of something vibrant and extremely singular here. The vases and pots that adorned the grave had been strategically chosen to…

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Susie Jacqueline replied saying "Thanks Melvin for the very high praise of my story and sorry for the slow response! With regards to the word 'dissembled', I meant to write 'assembled'. It's funny how even though I checked and double checked this story for typos ages ago and one still surfaces!"
3 years ago

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