Short Story: Flickers

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David Armstrong


Deja vu, dreams, or the Devil at work?


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Departure Lounge

The departure lounge was almost full. Paul Young sat in the centre of the room, sipping his coffee nervously. It was a clear night, and outside on the floodlit concourse he could see the baggage handlers loading a mountain of luggage into the holding bay of the aircraft.

On Board

The airplane began to taxi towards the runway whilst the head stewardess ran through the safety demonstration. Meanwhile other members of the cabin crew wandered up and down the aisle checking that seatbelts were secured and overhead luggage compartments correctly closed over. Paul read his emergency procedures information card and tucked it back into the netted compartment that was attached to the seat in front of him at knee height.

Paul gripped onto the armrest and puffed out his cheeks in anticipation of takeoff.

"Hey buddy," said the man sitting next to him in business attire, "don't worry about it. I fly all the time."

Paul gave a trembling smile. "Ignore me. I'm just…

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David Wardrop said "Wow, perfect pacing, writing that keeps you glued to the page."
8 months ago
Adam West said "Arguably your best so far, David. I was pulled this way and that, turned upside down so many times I felt as though I did not know my own name for sure. An economy of words helped to provide these constant changes in direction - I was reminded of Christopher Nolan's film Memento based on a short story - the story is back to front overlapping from scene till the end is the beginning - the repetition in dialogue with subtle changes was a masterstroke in Flickers - Bravo Sir! and many thanks - Adam"
8 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying "Thanks for the comment, Adam. I actually wrote this out in bed, longhand, with a pencil and paper as my computer was playing up at the time ... Good to know it was worthwhile!"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Oh poor Paul, this was very cleverly done and absolutely enthralling. Very impressive - Diane"
9 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Oh wow! Well done! This was absolutely gripping! What a fantastic plot!"
9 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying "Thanks, Jay. While I really enjoy reading stories by others who go to town on meaning and metaphor and deliver the occasional pearl of wisdom in the process, personally I just enjoy writing out entertaining little plots. Anything above that is a bonus."
9 months ago

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