Short Story: First Born

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Jacklin Murray


A young man is condemned to death in Roman occupied Jerusalem. Judge Jeremiah tries to intervene on behalf of the young man's mother and fails. A delinquent is sentenced by Jeremiah to Community Service in the local cemetery and sets of a chain of misunderstandings which guarantees that the executed man will be remembered for years to come.


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“How long have we been friends, Joe? Twenty, thirty years, maybe? It's so long you won’t mind me saying - this is one big mistake.”

Jeremiah shifted his bulk, searching in vain to be comfortable in a chair too small for his ample backside. What is it with chairs, he often complained. Made for looks not comfort. He also noted, gloomily, that this one was set a little lower than that of his companion sitting opposite.

Joseph Caiaphas did not respond but continued to gaze out of the window.

“Fine view, Joe,” Jeremiah filled the silence between them, “Classy. Always said you’d go far, but this time,” he shrugged his massive shoulders “perhaps too far.”

An hour he’d been jammed in this stupid chair trying to make the man see sense. An hour when he could have been catching some shut eye before the labours of the afternoon.

“It is out of my hands,” came the response “the law has…

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