Short Story: Fight Hs

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Matthew Garcia


An interesting account of High School Fight Club


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It was a Saturday when we got the idea of starting a little fighting group. My group of friends were incredibly bored with absolutely nothing to do. That weekend we all had seen the new movie “Never Back Down”, and something new and mysterious sparked in each of us; we acquired some brawling gloves as soon as we left the cinema. Those cheap little black MMA gloves, were beautiful in our eyes, the gateway to a new way of life, a new existence. The fighting started innocently enough, with a little audience, little punches and little injuries. All of us had finally found our calling. We all loved to fight, we all loved the pain of the first punch, and he numbing effect of the adrenalin coursing through our bodies like hot lead. We loved every little bit of it of it.

“First one to draw blood wins,” C.J, my tall, gangly, Asian-looking friend, enforced.

We were new to this…

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David Green said "Although the story kept my attention, there was something missing. The description of the fights leads to the 'ultimate' fight which was what? a draw? That's it? No message, no ending? nothing? (Coincidentally, my son is doing a graduate thesis on MMA.)"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "Interesting probe into the phsyche of fighting. It's hard for someone like me to understand the possibilty that you can actually enjoy being hurt. I've always had the ablity to switch off from pain, but I could never say I welcomed it, and would avoid it at all costs if it came down to the choice. This 'story' let me feel some of what motivated your protagonists, but I'll never really understand. Well written."
2 years ago

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