Short Story: Fantasie Française

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Erotic fantasy to keep you in suspenders! ;)


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Françoise Labrune has been a chambermaid at The Pontchartrain Hotel in New Orleans for half of her 30 years, so she has a good idea what a man like you hopes for when he checks in for the night. She starts her shift extra-early, ignoring your “Do Not Disturb” sign, feeling a surge of excitement tingling through her supple body as she slips in, silently securing the lock. She knows just what to do before taking your breakfast order.

She tiptoes over to find you asleep in bed. You’re half-awakened by her white linen apron chafing softly against her silky black skirt and her stiletto heels clicking delicately on the wooden floorboards. You wonder if you're still dreaming as she works her way around you, crouching briefly to gently rustle some papers into the bin. As she reaches to dust under your bed, just inches from your face, you catch the stupendous sight of her taut bosoms squeezed into the lacy…

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Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "Ouch! Was very disappointed in a good way! Nice read, this one. Bless!"
3 months ago
Elaine May Smith replied saying "Thanks very much for reading and for your kind comments! :)"
2 months ago
S Bush said "A real tease. Nicely done."
4 months ago
Ginny Swart said "First you lull the reader into thinking - what? Im not sure! But then, what a great twist! No escaping those vampires."
5 months ago
Elaine May Smith said "When I visited New Orleans it struck me that it was like Hallowe'en all year round, with all kinds of freaky costumes, ghost tours after dark, and tales of people who live like vampires. I think I need to weave all of this into a re-writing of this story."
7 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Very well written "action" and the end crept up on me until the last couple of sentence. A lovely light hearted touch I thought - well done - Diane"
7 months ago
Elaine May Smith replied saying "Hi Diane, your comments are much appreciated, thank you! I was just nibbling at the edge of erotica! ;)"
7 months ago
Richard Ardus said "Nice one Elaine!"
7 months ago
Elaine May Smith replied saying "Thanks very much, Richard! Enjoy the spooky season! ;)"
7 months ago
Jay Leffew said "So that's how they succeed so easily! (I'd underline 'that's', but you know what I mean...). Fiendishly clever. I often wondered why they didn't spread to the extent of exterminating all mankind, when it's so easy to recruit new members; - but then, what would they feed on, - animals?"
7 months ago
Elaine May Smith replied saying "So pleased to hear that you enjoyed it, Jay! Something to get your teeth into for Hallowe'en! ;)"
7 months ago
Adam West said "What a tease! And devilish too...many thanks, Adam"
7 months ago
Elaine May Smith replied saying "Hello Adam! Thank you for reading and for your comments. Happy Hallowe'en! ;)"
7 months ago

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