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Terry Collett


Two women dancers and their shared love.


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Edwina stood and took a drag on the cigarette; Elsa sat in a chair with her feet propped up on the radiator. They could still hear the piano playing in the hall as the other dancers carried on with the new dance routine. Edwina held onto the smoke, let it flow into her, before slowly letting it out in a long expression of air and smoke. Her legs ached; her back felt stiff. Mr Philips was a hard taskmaster. He was a perfectionist. He wanted the dance routine to be spot on, no room for slackers or those who couldn’t keep up. Elsa gazed out of the window at the grey sky. She was beginning to hate dancing; she felt sluggish, like she’d been emptied out of all energy and feelings. She could smell Edwina’s cigarette; the smoke entered her lungs and head. She fancied a cigarette herself, but she was trying to give it up. The piano in the…

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Richard Ardus said "Don't know who you're writing for with this one Terry. As a bloke writing about Saphic lovers you're probably on dodgy territory there. I'm sorry to say it reminded me of the sort of short piece you'd see in 'porn mags' when I was a teenager (1970's) and used to read such things."
9 months ago
Richard Ardus replied saying "We can't knock it - Jeffrey Bernard wrote porn to keep the wolf from the door and there'll be hundreds of others we don't know about!"
9 months ago
Terry Collett replied saying "I do not know what porn mags you used to read, Richard, but they must have been quite classy to have stories like this one. Lesbian stories exist outside of magazines of course. Even Virginia Woolf touches on the subject in Mrs Dalloway."
9 months ago
Terry Collett replied saying "Thank you for reading, Richard."
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "There I was thinking ah yes how difficult it is to focus on the everyday when one is reliving a dream encounter and then in came the dancing teacher - I am not sure what reaction you would have preferred but you made me chuckle to be honest - Diane"
9 months ago
Terry Collett replied saying "Thank you, Diane. I only wish to share what my Muse brings. I expect no given reaction or opinion knowing that each reader comes with their own impression of what they have read."
9 months ago

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