Short Story: Even Doves Have Pride

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Secular law and Spiritual law at play.


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Kato was six years old when he first witnessed his father practice his supernatural powers. They were having supper in the courtyard like most families did on a moon-lit night. His father was seated on a stool while the rest of the family sat on beautifully woven mats that his mother had made a few months back. His mother was always knitting or weaving something in those days.

They had a vehicle turning into their drive-way and his mother had anxiously turned around, then looked nervously at her husband.

“It is Obote`s soldiers,” said his father getting up. He put his plate on the mat before him, licked his fingers and then slowly walked around the circle made by his family three times. He then ran to the side of the house, disappeared around a corner and re-appeared at the other corner. He walked back and sat down, picked up his plate and…

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Julian Fields said "Thanks! A charming and well-written story. Well done."
5 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks Julian Fields...you very kind and glad you enjoyed it. Bless!"
5 months ago
Daniel Mays said "Thank you for this story. Very creative and great reading. I like the car not moving...reminds me of one of my old cars...In the winter months, It would not move either. Again Thanks, Daniel"
11 months ago
Daniel Mays replied saying "Thanks for the offer. It was a diesel."
11 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks for stopping by Daniel Mays...if you need help with your old car(s), you know where to find me. God Bless!"
11 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "You write extremely well. This is the first of your stories I've tried & it was very readable. I liked the follow on about the car & the audacity of those in menial power. Kind of like Star Wars with the Stormtroopers & the Jedi mind trick. Des"
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Ha ha ha, thanks Des Kelly, for stopping by and feedbacking, too. I hear Star Wars...you are too kind. Bless!"
1 year ago
Willie Douglas said "Though I loved this magical story, and the evasive magical powers that the father employed to protect his family, I wonder how many actually contemplate the terror that captivates a child - or anyone - when hostile soldiers storm in. Great writing."
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks WD...hope you will stay around more. Bless!"
1 year ago
James Tate said "Delicious. I want that power to make my house disappear when the double-glazing salesmen come knocking. Great little story Woody."
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Ha ha ha, that`s cheek, man! Thanks for stopping by and though I`m not promising, I will see what I can do about your salesmen problem! Glad you liked the story. Bless!"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "Kato reminded me of Derren Brown et al - a gifted psychological manipulator - quirky little story, AW - I liked it - many thanks, AW"
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks, AW. Bless!"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Yes this appealed to me. I believe that there is a way to cloak ones visibility, I think that one would have to be very evolved to be able to do it but I think there are so many things that we don't understand so why not. Liked the car though, I can just imagine it sitting there stubbornly refusing to be moved. - Diane"
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "He he he, DD...its actually based on a `true` story. There is a lot of funny stuff in Africa, one wonders...thanks for reading. Bless!"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Loved this. Supernatural stuff always gets me, and the ending was very satisfying, thanks."
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks, Jay...I now realize you are not for gore and mayhem! Bless!"
1 year ago

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