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Adam West


In the 36th century, travel is still important.


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The two hundred and fifty kilometres per hour station-to-station no-turbulence pipe came to a stop.

End of the line. Everyone off.

I stepped out the pipe onto a narrow walkway amongst a shoulder-to-shoulder throng six wide whose momentum funnelled me toward a down-ramp and into a square, where a girl with dreadlocks leaning against a 3-D sandwich-board bit through a foil wrapped protein bar - without first removing the foil.

Sodium glare from overhead down-lighters pooled around her bejewelled feet. When she looked up from the three hundred credit a go, all-in-one meal, silvery-white light flashed off her to-die-for self-cleaning teeth in titanium alloy.

No Crumbs. No unsightly residue. No substance too tough.

The Ad men aren't joshing us, I thought; those teeth are the business.

After the girl had swallowed the mint-flavoured bolus I asked about prices.

No off-peak travel permits till Thursday, she told me, at any cost.

I activated my Holo-I-Dent. Not even for Level Five workers, I said?

Nada.

Step lightly girl, I said, touching her…

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Steven Mace said "I like the style- a conscious or unconscious homage to Philip K.Dick (one of my favourite writers too!) with your own original nuances. Great piece."
3 weeks ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks, Steven, for reading and commenting - I hope PKD would not have thought too dimly of his fan's tribute - best wishes, Adam"
3 weeks ago
Charlie Wiseman said "Enjoyed the great shift in to another cosmos or dimension of space. It s bold and that's what makes it fun the Eros Seven name and the girl biting without taking off the wrapping great details. Keep your courage"
3 weeks ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks for reading and commenting, Charlie - I will try to be brave, it is after all what I admire most in writers. Just picked up The Unbearable Lightness of Being - a great example of writing courage - all the best Adam"
3 weeks ago
Thomas Halve said "Nicely written Adam. I love sci-fi but it is so easy to make it unreadable (for my Gen. Y attention span anyway) by smothering the fun with pseudo-technical terms and definitions. You have kept this nice and breezy and let the story-telling gently introduce the reader into the world rather than beating them over the head with it."
4 weeks ago
Adam West replied saying "I hear you, Thomas, and thanks for reading/commenting - I'm not big into sci-fi apart from PK Dick and more recently Voneggut, so more into the philosophical nature of the writing than the battle stuff of the Star Wars-esque end of the genre. To be fair, this story is little more than a tribute act! Glad you liked it though..."
4 weeks ago
James Tate said "I like to read comments before reading the story - saves embarrassing duplication. Having done that here I was already equipped with the Philip Marlow-esque voice over and that worked for me. A great short Adam."
2 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks James for reading another of my stories - and thank you for your praise - the 500 word limit competitions are a challenge I enjoy - I was raised on Bogart films and only recently read my only Raymond Chandler, The Big Sleep - one of the cuts (Director's?) of Blade Runner has Deckard's Marlow-esque style commentary and somewhere into penning this I lapsed in that territory - which was quite fun really - cheers, Adam"
2 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "An edge-of-the-seat slow tumble roll ride for me...very good interconnection between scenes and great progression, AW...keep em coming! Bless!"
3 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "I doubt that you are right doubting yourself because I feel your writing (though I admit we have different styles) is way better than mine, AW. Besides, I have improved as a direct result your help, together with the ever faithful girls always reading and feed backing on my page. Stop doubting and start over reaching! Bless!"
3 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Like yourself, AW, I imagine, I try to pit myself against those writers I admire the most and try to be objective about where I fall short - it's the only way to progress - but thanks for the compliment because it is a counterbalance against the feeling sometimes I am never going to improve - take care my friend, AW."
3 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "You kidding me? Your writing is great thought I had never read a Sci Fi side of you I think. Keep at it, bro. Bless!"
3 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks as always for reading, AW, and your take on my writing - much appreciated. I am glad you said good interconnection - as this is something I feel I could do better with, so maybe I ma improving? ATB AW"
3 months ago
Christine Human said "Tight, well paced and eminently readable, even by someone who professes not to enjoy sci -fi. Thank you Adam for this taster of life in the future. I wonder if your idea of credits as opposd to beneftis might work for the present generation! Those teeth biting through silver foil set mine on edge , brilliant. Great fun."
3 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks, Christine, for reading and your kind remarks - I love paying tribute to the master of Sci-Fi, PK Dick, and would love to think that I perhaps make a convert or two along the way - best wishes, Adam"
3 months ago
The Cabinet said "I like the inspiration you have potentially drawn from Dick's 'Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep'. Transposing the concept of thought, the longing, the daydream of imagination and minds-eye, upon a robot, or other without-mind-like-ours construct. Great job. I like the brevity of this piece and your conclusion is powerful and provocative."
4 months ago
The Cabinet replied saying "Ah, therein lies Dick's quandry. As alas, the majority of his Human protagonists (Deckard, Alys and Horselover Fat - to name an obvious few) suffer the same delusion. Or perhaps it is not a delusion at all. Great to meet another enthusiast."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks for your comments, The Cabinet, which are iwell nformed in a truly Dickian sense - I did not set out to write a Dick tribute but found that I was powerless to subjugate my subconscious - which said makes me feel more like an android construct that a so-called free thinking human being."
4 months ago
Heidi-jo Swain said "Took me out of my comfort zone - just what I needed at the end of a largely unproductive Sunday! Not my usual choice but this was great which proves that we should all stretch ourselves when it comes to reading choices shouldn't we? Now...where did I put that Blade Runner dvd?"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "LOL :-)"
4 months ago
Heidi-jo Swain replied saying "Found it - as you suggested - at the back of the wardrobe wedged between Goodfellas and Predator...oh dear..."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Heidi for reading and commenting - ahh, the comfort zone - best not to dwell there too long, I agree - the DVD is probably in the cubby-hole under the stairs or failing that try that mysterious old wardrobe in the spare 'oom'? best wishes, Adam"
4 months ago
Linda Bond said "Adam, I enjoyed the way you plunged us into this all too human world, it reminded me of Asimov and Arthur Clarke in its ability to create a believable yet different world."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Linda - Asimov is on my to read one day list. I love the expression...'you plunged us...' I suppose I did - glad it worked for you - best wishes Adam."
4 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "Hi Adam, Like a number of others who have commented, I don't really 'do' sci-fi, mainly because I can't seem to get my head around making it believable. You on the other hand seem to have no trouble. The world of the future is rarely depicted as being paradise more an enthropy of what we have now and yet in the midst of all that technology is always seen to be advancing and this again is something that you capture well. Keep writing it - i might even start to catch up one day!!! Thanks....Andy"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Andy for reading something outside your usual range - I kind of force myself from time to time to dip into genres I would not normally entertain and since being on SB and embracing the short story I have of course widened my reading material still further - one of the joys of writing sci-fi is the sense of freedom if affords - best wishes - Adam"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "Hi,Adam, I had to read a little slowly since this is not usually my genre. But I got caught up and enjoyed it for the newness of something in my life. To contemplate sci-fi worlds is sort of scary for me. I want to go read this again and really get 'with it'. Nicely done. Patsy"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Hi Adam, and thanks. At least I can now read a little. It is almost like a sty(e) but infection invades the entire duct. Painful as all get out --especially when the doctor messes around with it. Ah well, hope he doesn'thave to lance the darned thing. Such a pest to interrupt life. Eye drops help, but blind you behind a veil of water fall. Hah. And this too shall pass. I have managed to read a couple of stories, but could not last long enough to comment. The competition is going well. I hope I can submit one before closing. That is always fun. Miss you all. Patsy"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Sorry to hear you have problems with your eyes (I don't know what a chalison is) Patsy - I you will hope up to submitting stories soon - and commenting too - I always read yours and Jay and Diane's comments in particular - take care and hope all is well soon my friend, Adam"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Well hello, Adam. Been away for awhile. Chalison on my right eye and I spend very short periods on the pc. Cannot see very well sometimes, but that's life. Have to deal with stuff as best we can. Have a couple stories to submit, as soon as I can make sure of the spellling and what I have written. Not into Kindle so far, but may have to join the crowd in order to learn all about it. Have a good week. See you. Patsy"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Hi Patsy - slow reading is good (sometimes) - not sure if my stuff stands that test, but anyway, I'm glad you caught up it, as you say. Thanks once more for taking the time to read and comment - All The Best - Adam"
4 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "Hi Adam, thankfully I'll never live to see the world you portray so effectively. I was/am a big fan of Blade Runner and this had all the hallmarks for a series of short burst stories. Good luck if you go that route. Very effective. Des"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Hi Des - thanks as always for reading and commenting positively. This was the Director's Cut I guess - with the Philip Marlow-esque voice over - thanks for the encouragement - I might just revisit my Man With No Name - I'm mixing up genres now - now there's a thought..."
4 months ago
Suzanne Mays said "Thanks, Adam. I don't know much about sci-fi, but I could really see this. Especially the girl biting through the foil wrapper and tubes to everywhere. Getting off at the wrong stop really bothers me now."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks for reading and commenting, Suzanne. The last bit of polish this story got (as I approached the 500 word limit) was the foil wrapper - glad I included it now :-)"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Who knows? That's what I love about sci-fi, so much has already happened as written in the earliest such fantasies, like premonitions. Imagination can run riot, and maybe even warn of wrong turns which could be taken in our headlong rush into future changes. Is this a warning? Thanks Adam, I'm suitably discomfited."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks as always, Jay, for reading and commenting - much appreciated. The warning implied here, about inter-stellar travel is quite clear: BOOK EARLY :-)"
4 months ago
Bill Haddow-allen said "Enjoyed this, Adam. It is all horribly believable. A sinister, unsettling dream which might just be real one day. Some may actually look forward to it! Well done."
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Bill for reading and commenting - I value your opinion - pleased you felt it believable and found it enjoyable - cheers, Adam"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "You know what, I don't really read sci fi - I don't but you always manage to make it so very "reachable" if that's the right word and real and attractive. I enjoyed this very much and the last little sentence was so poignant and really rather sad. Super stuff - thanks for this - Diane"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks as always for commenting and your considered remarks, Diane - my mission to convert you to sci-fi goes on...best wishes, Adam"
4 months ago

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