Short Story: Dangers Of Uniqueness

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In East Africa, Albinos are being killed purposefully, especially in Tanzania.


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My name is Marissa Kikwete and I am fifteen. I was born in the historical city of Bagamoyo, seventy kilometers north of Dar es Salam. I am afraid to leave our house these days because I was born with a condition.

Long ago, Bagamoyo used to be a slaving town; then it became the capital of German East Africa. Now it is just another Tanzanian city where people like myself are quickly becoming not only endangered, but threatened with extinction, like some animal of the wild. I am an albino.

Albinism is a rare, non-contagious, genetically inherited condition occurring in both genders from any ethnicity, all over the world. Both parents must have the gene for it to be passed on. The condition causes a lack of pigmentation in the hair, skin and eyes, causes vulnerability to sun and bright light exposure. All people with albinism are visually impaired. While numbers in North America and Europe are estimated at 1 in every…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Gosh this was powerful and very moving. A terrible comment on a society that it could treat one of its members in this way - shame - Thanks for this shocking and thought provoking story - Diane"
8 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Welcome, DD, thanks for stopping by. We might not be able to do much about a lot, but a little something goes a long way, in my view. Bless!"
8 months ago
Adam West said "Simply told - but nonetheless very effective account. This is so sad AW...thank you, Adam"
8 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thank YOU, AW..for stopping by. If we all do our part, maybe good will triumph over evil...as it should! Bless!"
8 months ago
Jay Leffew said "This was wonderful. Join the Rhinoceros, Tiger, etcetera. It's quite incredible that such stupid fetishes can become so embedded in people's minds, that common-sense has no chance, so the innocent living victims must suffer. It's a dreadfully primitive form of mindlessness, which really makes my blood boil! . . . . . In a richer country you could wear contact lenses and dye your hair, but then you wouldn't, presumably, be a victim there in the first place, so you could be yourself. What a dreadful blight poverty can be..."
9 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "All you say is true but mixed all up in there is also a hugely unhealthy dose of indecency and disregard and disrespect for human life! Bless!"
8 months ago

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