Short Story: Country Living

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A P Bailey


A city girl reluctantly visits her husband's country cousins. They witness an Aurora Borealis event and find the world has changed.


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“Bloody family commitments,” she growled, throwing an extra jumper into the bag, holding her warmest underwear and wooliest of tights. “What made you think I would want to spend a week with your monosyllabic cousin and his misanthropic father in that gloomy cave?”

“Think of the clean air, the views, the peace...and Aunt Fanny's cooking,” he said.

“Bah! They have clean air, views and peace in Antigua.”

“Well, we're going. Michael needs some help to finish the house, we need a break and....I think I can promise you some spectacular nights.”

“Ho Ho, big boy, not on that creaking bed.”

“What I meant was,” he struggled, “there’s a good chance that we will see an aurora because this is a maximum sunspot year.”

And so they bickered. Finally falling into a silent truce as they left the motorway and teased their way into the hills; the roads narrowing to lanes, the green strip below and the grey strip above, all…

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Christine Rutherford said "A really interesting story. The twist at the end is unexpected and the whole thing stayed with me a while, which is always the mark of a good story. I'd have liked to know more about how She spent her days, to see how she resisted being seduced by the farm. I think there are inconsistencies, like why is the old house so cold when there could have been a fire in the bedroom? Why move all at once when the house was ready in stages? However, it held my attention to the end and I was glad I read it."
1 year ago
A P Bailey replied saying "Thanks for your comments. I shall bear them in mind if I ever get round to revisiting and extending this story. It is really a version of chapter one of a novel I guess. Re. the bedroom...I was trying to give the impression that our city dwelling heroine was leaving the comfort of her home for a short stay with her husband's frugal country cousin. The all in one move was forced upon the young couple because the solar storm had damaged the country's infrastructure so badly that she was trapped in this remote backwater by the imposition of a state of emergency and a breakdown of discipline (not that could ever happen here....)"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "I've drawn the design for a house made of 10.ml glass, which is a reservoir with fish in it, and the home inside. Our effluent goes into tanks under the house, where the build up of gasses provides cooking and light, and the solids are pushed out to be composted; - there are horizontal wind-turbines and solar panels on the roof... we can't all find a spring in the hills, but I think it's preferable to my idea; a lot cheaper to achieve too..."
2 years ago
David Appleby said "Country Living - Brilliant,engaging,thought-provoking & very readable."
4 years ago

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