Short Story: Christmas On The Bell

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Barbara Timmons


A woman will always find a way when she sets her mind to it.


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Wild winds churned up the turbulent waters battering the 100 foot tower with foaming salty spray but the constant flashing lamp was unaffected by the storm lashing the Scottish east coast.

Eleven miles off shore from the fishing town of Arbroath, two of the three men on the century old Bell Rock Lighthouse were settled across the small wooden table which claimed most of the cramped living space. Before them were the few final pieces of a challenging chess game sitting on their checkered board. While herelithis pipe, the older bearded man, who had just descended from the lantern room, sought to delay his obvious defeat. His opponent, Rob Skelly smiled smugly.

Behind Jim Donald, head keeper on this shift, Davie Burns reluctantly rose from his bunk with his precious bundle of letters once more replaced in their tin box. Nelly, his dearest love, was Jim's only daughter. The wedding plans were well…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "This left me with a smile and a wish that they did indeed have a VERY happy Christmas. This brought to mind one of my very favourite books by Terry Pratchett - The Monstrous Regiment - it is wonderful, mind you I find all of his writing wonderful. Back to your story though, it was a lovely warmhearted look at ordinary (though not so ordinary really given the bravery of such folk) people and it was perfectly believable and very entertaining. Enjoyed it - thanks - Diane"
3 months ago
Barbara Timmons replied saying "Hi Diane Delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks for your comments. T.P. one of my favs too but have not read The Mons' Reg' yet. Regards, Barbara"
3 months ago
Adam West said "I enjoyed how you moved from scene to scene and kept the continuity. I wondered early on what period this was and was glad that you did not overlook that and let the reader know - in due course - enjoyable, heart-warming story, many thanks, Adam."
3 months ago
Adam West replied saying "In one of my recent submissions on SB, Barbara, I added an 'author note' giving some background to the story - your anecdote was worthy of tagging on the end as something similar - I know from experience how much I enjoy learning about what had inspired a writer - it somehow adds something extra - best wishes, Adam"
3 months ago
Barbara Timmons replied saying "Hi Adam. You always find the time to comment and encourage. Thank you. This tale was as a result of a meeting with the manager of the lighthouse museum in Arbroath who talked about the 200 year anniversary of the lighthouse in 2011 I asked him if there was ever a woman keeper. When the answer was an emphatic ' NO. ' I was intrigued to create a situation where this could have happened. I hope it seemed plausible."
3 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Thoroughly enjoyed this; it brought a smile to my face, and was very well written. It's disconcerting that the computer has a tendency to fuse three words together, and usually it's only a couple of times in a story, but it had a field day in this one, which is a great shame. I wonder if the editors would take it back and iron them out for you?"
3 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Thanks for the compliment, my artwork is usually a lot more naive than this, so I'm still puzzled where he came from. . . . . As to the word-fusing, it's nothing to do with you, for some reason their computer has been doing this ever since I joined, and probably ever since they began; every now and then at some time during the transition from you to the editors, or more likely from them to the published state, when they wouldn't be aware of it either. I have told them, but it's hard to explain until they have an example, now they have a humdinger of an example in your piece, and perhaps Gary will be able to unravel the mystery with it."
3 months ago
Barbara Timmons replied saying "Thanks Jay. Yes about the missed spacing - I was very careful when I sent it to make sure it was ok but when it appears like that it makes you seem so foolish. Maybe I should have let them edit it first instead of pushing it through. Impatience can be my downfall. By the way during the past few weeks since I started submitting pieces and reading the replies I had always assumed that JAY was a fella. Sorry. Just read more about you last night and MOST IMPRESSED with the horse painting on the wall which is all your own work. Well done."
3 months ago

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