Short Story: Been Conceiving You

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The shallow breath

ecstasy is carnal

soul hides in the corner

a spear blade, for me, for ever?

it's a different story, tagged

one heart stabbed, while the other waiting for a stroke

no, I've never kissed you, he said,

and all this just for you

how is it that you don't have to be perfect for me to love you?

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Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "Ah, unlike the others, I love this disjointedness...makes one think, ponder! Maybe it`s only because i love breaking `rules` but writing outside the box can be fun! Bless!"
3 months ago
Bartlomiej Bania said "ta everyone for the comments! you all are right! :)"
3 months ago
Ginny Swart said "Honestly, I didn't get it. Random disconnected thoughts which irritated!"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "I tried word for word and phrase for phrase and could not get it to speak to me. Something seems missing, as it can be sometimes. It may be in my unfamiliarity with your work. I shall look at some other, and I am sure will find more understanding. Keep writing, though. Never quit. Thank you for sharing. Patsy R Liles"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "This seemed too disjointed. I get most of the sentences as individual statements, and completely understand and agree with the last line, but it doesn't seem to emanate as the result of the previous lines. A bit too obscure to be happy with for me I'm afraid."
4 months ago

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