Short Story: Basra Incident

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Gordon Forrest


An incident in Iraqa seen from the perspectives of both combatants.


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It might have been different if I’d delayed another second. I might not have been writing this now. I had been lying in the shade of a half-dead palm. It too had suffered, though an innocent witness to the conflict. Half its fronds were snapped and hung down at an unnatural angle, but it still afforded me cover from the blistering sun. I’d been observing a group of shell-shattered buildings about two hundred yards away and my eyes were beginning to play tricks.

As the fire-laden breeze picked up and seared my face I thought I saw movement at the side of a house. Looking down the sight of my weapon I squeezed off a round. There was no further movement. A bead of sweat rolled down my nose, dropped on the cuff of my combat jacket and evaporated. My mind began to wander. Funny how the sun made me sweat and then gobbled it up as if…

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Jay Leffew said "A chilling and yet compassionate comment on the futility of war. Beautifully observed, with the right level of inevitability at the end, and the 'smile'... you summed up wars in general, here; they usually arise from some stupid misunderstanding; a diplomatic 'faux pas', these days; it is intensely sad."
2 years ago
Carolyn Young said "Thought provoking - This is a thoughtfully worked piece, giving perspective to all his charactures."
4 years ago

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