Short Story: Answer In One Month

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Mikki Shimodo


Yuu Is a girl who lost her father during a fire, her mother is her only family left.


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Even though it was raining I kept running. No matter what the consequences would be at school, I had to let him know. At the airport, I saw him just before he left. I yelled his name out, hoping he'd hear me, but even though I yelled as if my lungs would burst, he didn't hear me. I called him one more time before I gave up, and to my surprise, he turned to face me, and just stared at me. I didn't know what to do, all I could manage was a smile, and a goodbye wave. He smiled back at me, as if he didn't want to leave me but had no choice.

The plane started to move as my tears fell slowly down my cheeks. He saw me cry, and he stopped smiling and looked so miserable. My tears wouldn't stop. I couldn't move or talk, and suddenly someone came up to me and asked if I was…

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Christine Human said "The identity of the person leaving alluded me for for a while,- next time I will read the synopsis before launching into the story. But it raises a question for me - is it right to make the synopis explain the story. Enjoyed it though and will look out for your stories"
3 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "You certainly put a lot in and wrung a lot out of that little story - well done. Thanks for sharing it and look forward to seeing more soon...Andy"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "A wonderful bit of writing. But if one goes into this not knowing it is a father she is losing, one searches for the identity of the 'he'. I had to read twice, go back to the synposis to see if I could determine who that he was. Otherwise, again it is excellent. Thanks for sharing. Patsy R Liles"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "The brevity and the amount of "unsaidness" ( just invented a word) made this quite surreal to read. Very impressive and really quite passionate. - Thanks - Diane"
4 months ago
Adam West said "Very sweet. Quite a lot of story in under 400 words, testimony to good editing - well-written - many thanks, Adam"
4 months ago

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