Short Story: All The Queen's Men

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THIS IS MY TAKE ON THE ANGLO-BOER WAR .... WHOMEVER READS THIS, I DO HOPE YOU ENJOY IT!


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In October 1899, war broke out in South Africa, between the two Boer Republics and the British Empire. England controlled the Cape Colony and Natal, but not the Transvaal and the Free State. These two republics took on the might of the British Empire. None of the Boers were trained soldiers; just men of the earth, farmers fighting for control of their land and beliefs. It was during this war, that guerrilla warfare, trench warfare, concentration camps and camouflage uniforms were first used. It was to change the way in which wars’ were fought from then on …

82 742 Boers

346 693 trained soldiers from the vast British Empire.

This is my take on that war. Whoever reads it, I hope you find it an enjoyable read!

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ALL THE QUEEN’S MEN

In Cape Town, private William Varney crossed the Grand Parade and headed towards the castle. His mood was good even though he was being sent to the Orange Free State tomorrow and would…

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Ernie Steinbeck said "This is the first story of yours that I have read; I am glad that it was this one -- I am on my way to read others. I suppose it is only fair to admit that 'I cried'. - ernie -"
1 year ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thank you for reading my story, Ernie. It is a rather touching story. Feel free to read anything of mine you like!"
1 year ago
Thomas Mackay King said "Loved it you painted clear pictures I could feel the heat of the veld and the despair of the many mothers in both countries, congratulations."
1 year ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thank you, Thomas for reading and commenting on my story. So glad that you enjoyed it!"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "The passion that you feel for this subject comes over so very strongly in your writing. A heartrending tale indeed and what struck me as I read was that in a box at my dad's house we have my great grandfather's discharge papers from after the Boer war and so my friend though little has changed in regard to man's inhumanity to man at least through the advance of modern science I can communicate with you and send a warm greeting and that has surely got to be a good thing. I often feel great compassion for the plight of the "ordinary" soldier of all nations who is called upon to act against his own conscience and here you have highlighted that very thing so strongly. Well done - Diane"
2 years ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Yes, you're quite right, Diane, man's inhumanity towards his fellow man is even more evident today. Goodness, so your great-grandfather fought in the Boer War - I even had great-grandparents fighting on both sides of that war too! Also on my mother's side had great-grandparent's who decided to settle here while the war was in progress - can you imagine? He was English who emigrated to Australia and then after staying there for 12 years and when gold and diamonds were discovered here, he decided to come here, but that is another story in itself! Glad you enjoyed reading this! Bernice"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "Oh, Wow! I'm crying! This is so deeply perceptive and to the point, and the letters are absolutely the right way to convey the horror. You've really cracked it with this one. Fantastic atmosphere!"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Looking forward to it!"
2 years ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "I am REALLY REALLY thrilled that you liked this one! The subject is very close to my heart as my paternal great-grandmother was in a concentration camp. I have a conclusion to this story whick I will submit it to the site shortly. Thank you so much for reading and the comment, Jay."
2 years ago

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