Short Story: Aftershock

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Lachlan Gunn


Bonita, a young Asian air hostess, forced through necessity to act as a drugs courier by Hong Kong Triads, makes a drug drop on the Hong Kong Star Ferry with unforeseen consequences.


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It was early evening in Hong Kong one Friday in 1991. Bonita rushed into the lift of her Whampoa tower block, clutching her handbag and the bottle of wine. She was dressed in the black jacket that she always wore on such occasions and her fine, dark hair was tied back, accentuating her tanned good looks. As the lift descended she found herself going over the details of the ‘drop’ again and again in her mind.

She was an air-hostess with a major Hong Kong based airline. A Malaysian National, she had been befriended by another air-hostess the previous year, a local girl from Hong Kong, and the two of them had become reasonable friends. The other girl always seemed to be a little insincere, however, and was always pushing to introduce Bonita to her 'friends'. Eventually Bonita agreed and it was not long before the 'friends' began asking her to do them small favours in return for a cash…

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Kyle J Durrant said "A nice piece of writing. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Made me feel sorry for the protagonist. Glad I came across this"
6 months ago
Lachlan Gunn replied saying "Thanks for the kind words Kyle, much appreciated. My first full length novel 'Merdeka', also with an Asian theme, is due for publication next week. If you are interested you can find out about it at http://merdeka-lachlangunn.blogspot.com/"
6 months ago
Becky Gunn said "I lived it - Brilliant! - So much story in such a short space of time. You are a natural and have the ability to take your reader away, far away, for just a few minutes. looking forward to the next one."
2 years ago
Lachlan Gunn said "Thanks - Many thanks for the positive feedback Kate. This story was written many years ago when I still lived in HK. I'll do my best to deliver a sequel ...... :-) "
2 years ago
Kate Smart said "sequel please!! - A very entertaining crime story with a great setting - kind of like a Hong Kong based Jackie Brown? Sequel please!"
2 years ago

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