Short Story: Accident

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Diane Dickson


Bad gets worse, oh so much worse.


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The moonlight was shattered and splintered. Shirley moved. Panic overwhelmed her. A great duvet was smothering her, wrapping and binding her limbs. She began to hyperventilate as pain forced her back to a vile and frightening reality.

The splintering, glinting light danced on the windscreen and she realised that the sobbing sound was close with her, escaping from her own throat. She struggled to consciousness as her mind organised the scrambled jigsaw to show her the full picture.

The duvet was of course her air bag, the pain was bearable and she didn’t think that she was bleeding anywhere. Keep still, that was the thing, just keep still for a moment, think and assess. Okay, there had been a small cat running across the road, a deep dashing shadow in the glare of the headlights a flash and gone. Then just a blank, “Shit.” She laughed to herself a small desperate sound. “That’s an understatement Shirl,” speaking aloud, the little noise in…

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Mark Patrick said "My brother just sent me a photo of my tiny nephew dressed as Thomas the Train, and I was thinking Halloween has gotten a little too cute lately. Thank you Diane for sharing this gory tale and for reminding me the 'reason for the Halloween season'. Nicely done. -Mark"
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Mark for reading and commenting. I also wonder what the connection between Halloween and Thomas or indeed many of the other cute costumes is. I think that there has been a total confusion nowadays between Trick or Treat (which in my humble opinion is purely commercialism) and the deep, dark origins of Halloween. Glad I was able to take you back to the gory guts of the thing :-)"
6 months ago
Elaine May Smith said "Perfect for Hallowe'en, Diane, thank you! Just as the reader thinks she's going to make it... Yikes!"
7 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much - I agree yikes - tee hee"
7 months ago
Stephen Hobbs said "Enjoyable read Diane. Well done."
7 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Stephen - I am happy that you enjoyed it - Diane"
7 months ago
Mike Jackson said "A great story Diane. I could feel the pain and the panic as she tried to get out of the car but I wasn't expecting that ending. A wonderful, ghoulish twist. Thanks for an enjoyable read."
7 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks so much for the comment and I am glad to see that you planning on putting more of your work on shortbread. Looking forward to reading it."
7 months ago
Alexander Dickson said "Really enjoyed reading this story, great atmosphere Keep writing Alexander"
7 months ago
Almir Meljovikj said "Great one Diane! Very scary and very unpredictable. Cheers, Almir"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment I really do appreciate it - Diane"
8 months ago
Allison Symes said "Very scary stuff, Diane. Possibly not best read just before bedtime!!!"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Well I guess it might be okay providing you have a trusty teddy bear!! - Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment I really do appreciate it - Diane"
8 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "OMG Diane, how do you do it? This was fiercely real but with such a twist at the end it made me shudder. Your dreams must be ripe fodder. Well done. Des"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Desmond - you make me blush with your terribly kind comments. Thank heavens I don't dream much of this stuff, to be honest I have no idea where it comes from, perhaps I shouldn't look too closely - thank you again for taking the time to offer such encouragement - Diane"
8 months ago
Adam West said "Great stuff - did not see where it was going - cleverly done indeed...many thanks, Adam"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Adam - glad to know that the end was a "surprise" - thanks as always for reading and commenting. - Diane"
8 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Lovely and gruesome; in respect of the air-bag; maybe a direct thought in italics from your victim might have worked better, 'though I can't say it bothered me particularly. Nice one to enter the second comp. Well done."
8 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Can you imagine me not being 'triggered'? I did a 500 on the subject before it was opened; now I must set to on something longer...:-)"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks jay - it just proves how useful this site is to us wannabes though because the comment about the air bag made me go back and have another look and I came up with a much better line for that. I won't say what it is because I am not sure that would be honest and fair at this stage but afterwards I'll perhaps re-edit the work. Thanks so much for your kind comment - I trust that you will be entering something?"
8 months ago
Linda Bond said "I think I'll read this one again on Halloween Diane! I loved the shock ending, like a 21st century version of a Hammer Horror or a Roald Dahl short story."
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "wow - thank you so much - I know that I could never be compared to the great and wonderful Roald Dahl but just to be mentioned in the same sentence is a thrill - thank you."
8 months ago
Kate Smart said "gruesome and scary!! highly appropriate - great stuff Diane."
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so very much Kate - Diane"
8 months ago
James McEwan said "A good story for halloween! I beleive you started to get the reader to think Shirl was having a dream-but as soon as you mentioned windscreen, then it was clear. I think sometimes you overstate in you writing. The following is an example of what I mean 'the duvet of course was her air bag'. If you had your character struggling with the air bag for breath... the reader can deduct the idea of the duvet from your previous paragraph. This is just an observation and not intentionally critical. Enjoyed reading your story and the twist at the end. James."
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you for reading and commenting. I do see what you mean about the air bag. I was trying to convey that moment that you have when you recover consciousness and strange things suddenly become clear. Glad you enjoyed the story anyway and thanks again for taking the time to comment."
8 months ago
James McEwan replied saying "spelling - James.. - I believe..."
8 months ago

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