Short Story: A Patch For Harry

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Thomas Halve


About the passing of a generation.


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The bullet whistled as it sliced through,

exclamations of delight,

at a second helping

of Victoria Sponge.

Its copper casing rotated,

as it tore holes through letters,

written by lover’s

of the understatement.

It’s passing left ripples in air,

softened by the innocent shouts,

of those unaware

of the vastness of Space.

It cracked a cry of dawn chorus,

as it ricocheted off trees,

planted, by those,

who knew their place.

It tumbled a cartwheel,

across fields carved out,

by your grandfather’s,

grandfather’s plough.

It screamed as it flew over the mud

and the bodies

and the rats

and into Harry’s face.

And yet Harry lived on,

and on, and then he died.

And what,

shall we,

do now?

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Adam West Guest Editor said "Had to read this twice (that's 'cause I'm not that smart) to 'get it' so to speak, but as is the case with many great pieces of writing it is of course, worthy of a second read, and there is something special when all the meaning (or your own interpretation of those meanings takes shape) - wonderful words imagery etc. - you might like my Out Of Time, Thomas - hope it is not too shabby alongside this...anyway, many thanks, Adam. PS (wish us luck in the play-offs - just listened to DW on BBC and he is already resigned to our fate today)"
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles said "Early in WWI my husband's grandfather served in France. There he found the beginnings of his family name, Le Isles(Liles) staying with a family that turned out to be cousins. He was wounded and ultimately sent home, short one leg. Reading A Patch for Harry it took to the' Victoria Sponge' and 'coppe' covered bullets to clue me in. We heard his story many times. He lived to 100, in time to see his son die in the South Pacific and his grandsons become involved in many subsequent wars. He was always saying, "We fought the war to end all wars, but it didn't happen, did it?" Very thought provoking, Thomas, for those who get the connection. A tribute to all soldiers. Thanks for sharing. Patsy Liles"
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "My husband's grandfather had made friends also with several British soldiers somehow. They were kind to him as he became cut off from his regular outfit, while having the surgery crudely done in a farmhouse, and afterward found the place for him to stay until he could be brought home. Some months, of course. The Liles family told us that when he was proficient with a wooden leg and crutches, he went to England to visit these two wonderful Brits and there was introduced to Victoria Sponge which he described as rather bland. His description of the home and hospitality has made England very special to my Liles family. (Oh, should have been copper, not coppe bullets....sorry. Sometimes I type too fast..... Ah yes, change. The everlasting kaleidoscope. This has turned back the pages and given me a glimplse of the life and times of Earl Arthur Liles, my husband's GF. Thanks, Patsy R Liles"
1 year ago
Thomas Halve replied saying "Thankyou for your kind comment Patsy! By the look's of your profile you are American aren't you? I'm surprised you got the 'Victorian sponge' - is it called that in the States? I included it because, to me, something that marks out that generation and my grandparents generation was an appreciation of the milder, smaller pleasures in life - something that has, to some extent, been lost over the past few decades. My grandparents for example would always go 'oooooohhhh, lovely' when presented with a slice of Victoria sponge (to me - the blandest of cakes!!). These days our tastes are far more exotic (not a bad thing at all) and superlative-focused on bigger and better (a bad thing in my opinion). This is just 'change' and not all of it is bad by any means, but to me, Harry's death was symbolic in marking this change - the number of people who truly appreciate a cup of tea and slice of Victoria sponge are slowly fading away."
1 year ago
Desmond Kelly said "Very good piece. I didn't get the connection to WW1 until I read the comments by others. Keep going, if everyone was asked to write a poem about war maybe they'd think about it a little deeper than the usual jingoistic litany of heroism and loss. Des (By the way if you;ve time to read one of my stories try Call of Duty, that too is based on WW1)"
1 year ago
Thomas Halve replied saying "Exactly, whilst Harry was hugely symbolic as being 'the last' - anyone can fight a war and be lucky enough to get very old. What makes me like him as an individual was the grace with which he grow old and how he maintained his pacifistic stance. He bear no grudge to the Germans he fought and had this to say about war: "To me, it's a licence to go out and murder. Why should the British government call me up and take me out to a battlefield to shoot a man I never knew, whose language I couldn't speak? All those lives lost for a war finished over a table. Now what is the sense in that?". I shall head over to check out you story. Thanks for your comment!"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "I suppose I should know who this is, as Diane obviously does, but even though I don't, (pardon my ignorance), the piece is very striking. A moment in time very graphically described."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "111!!! Wow! Thanks for the snippet of a most important piece of history; I should manage to remember that now."
1 year ago
Thomas Halve replied saying "Thanks Jay! Harry Patch was the last surviving British person to have fought in World War One - he died in 2009 at the age of 111. After WW1 he had 87 years to think about war and he nicely concluded that it was all a load of nonsense. There is a nice Radiohead tribute to him here http://bit.ly/Tn06K"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Indeed - what we should do is write things like this to make sure we remember. I saw two lovely planters at the park gates in Bath, a memory to Harry Patch. He always said he wasn't a hero, that the ones who died were heroes but we are depleted by his passing aren't we. Lovely piece - Thanks."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "I agree 100% with what you say, I was absolutely shocked to the core when a youngish girl I was working with a few years ago didn't know who Hitler was. I try to tell my grandchildren as much as I am able, they know the names of the that pulled my grandad's gun carriage and as they get older I'll tell them more but it's not the same as seeing the evidence in the form of bomb sites and so on. Heaven forbid that they should ever have to and they do learn about it in school, but I do think as writers we do have an opportunity to help to ensure it's not forgotten. On the wider stage I wonder if it just all moved too fast and swept much of value away. Dolly and Jumbo by the way !!! (the horses, and both survived)"
1 year ago
Thomas Halve replied saying "Thanks for your nice comment Diane. Harry's death is really significant to me, not just because of the tragedy of World War One and the fact that he seemed a very nice and humble man but also because it represents a hugely symbolic break with the past. Harry's generation and the generation immediately after his had a conection with everything that has gone before in a way that later generations havent. Those born in the 1900's-1920's had arguably more commonalities with those born in the 1700's than they do with those born in the 1960's. As they gradually die out it's a big disconnect with the past."
1 year ago

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