Short Story: A Lovely Special Day

ShortbreadJean BeardShort Stories › A Lovely Special Day

Please log in or join for free to download, rate and comment on this story. You can read online without being a member!

About this Short Story

Written by
Jean Beard


A story about celebrating a saints day and a relationship.


  • 1940 Words
  • 2 Comments
  • 59% Community Rating
  • 252 Views

Add to Bookshelf

Competitions & Prizes

This story has not yet been entered into any short story writing competitions.

Rhiannon Morgan hurried to open the front door of her homely cottage in answer to the persistent knocking. Her home was in a rural position of St David’s, the smallest Cathedral in Wales, and within easy walking distance to the white sand beaches.

Gethin Williams hugged her exuberantly. “Cariad, bore da. Are you ready to have fun? Today is a special day in the Welsh calendar celebrating the Patron Saint of Wales, St David.”

Rhiannon laughed as she went to the foot of the stairs shouting to the girls. “Come on girls, Gethin’s here. He’s come to tell us what day it is.”

Her daughters, Meghan and Jennifer raced eagerly down the stairs. Jennifer, the youngest by three years, gave a twirl. “Hooray, it’s St David’s day. Do we look good in our costumes?”

The girls were wearing, a red and white striped flannel petticoat under a red flannel open fronted nightgown, a white blouse and a skirt made of wool with a check…

  Read Short Story     Download Short Story


Please login or join for free to rate this story.


This story has yet to be reviewed!


Adam West Guest Editor said "Lovely story. Plenty od local/cultural references helped give this life - a standout sentence I admire here was -- It is the sensible thing to do, but sense didn’t always lend a hand - Many thanks Adam"
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "I can't give you much for plot, but you can write, and this was pleasant enough, with a rewarding end. . . . . Could you remember that each separate person speaking needs a separate paragraph to themselves, even if it's only one word? There are also a couple of occasions when you added a word which wasn't needed, and spoiled the flow a smidgin; I think you would have noticed, with a break, then coming back to it before you submitted."
2 years ago

Read and Download Romance Short Stories

Read A Lovely Special Day by Jean Beard and other Romance short stories at Shortbread!
Also, write short stories, enter short story competitions and listen to audio short stories online for free!