Short Story: A Friend For Margaret

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Ginny Swart


Full of groundless anxieties and neuroses, Margaret definitely needs a friend.


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Margaret’s blood ran cold. She listened intently and heard the sound again. Somewhere outside in the cold and dark, that was definitely the icy chink of metal on metal. A gun? A key to open the front door?

She knew she shouldn’t have trusted that key- cutter last week, he probably ran a nice little sideline in selling duplicates to his thieving friends. But when the postman had stolen her front door key, she’d needed to change the lock, of course. He’d been another tricky customer, the postman. The sort of man who liked to cruelly tease defenseless old women. He’d somehow managed to get the key back into her bag after she’d had a new lock fitted, causing her all that expense. And he still had to nerve to smile and greet her every day.

Hardly daring to breathe, she pressed her ear to the front door but there was a long silence. Had she imagined it, as Jeff had always…

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Steven Mace said "An interesting piece of twisted black comedy!"
3 weeks ago
Ginny Swart replied saying "Thanks Steven, I like writing twisted and black, it comes quite effortlessly!! Ginny"
3 weeks ago
Jay Leffew said "That last remark made me laugh; he really should've known better than to keep it in his pocket for so long; serves him right. Good one Ginny!"
8 months ago
Ginny Swart replied saying "Thanks Jeff! I actually wrote this with a gazillion watt taser in her hand and blood trickling from his lifeless mouth but then thought, nah,,, too dark! Ginny"
8 months ago
Adam West said "LOL @ Diane - Car Crash Fiction - a new genre? Expertly woven tale in a is he or isn't he mode right from the off - kept me guessing right till the end - nicely done indeed (and funny I thought too)...many thanks, Adam"
8 months ago
Ginny Swart replied saying "Glad you enjoyed it Adam! Ginny"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Oh dear what a shame is about the only thing I can think of to say right now. I am sure that there is humour here somewhere but I'm blowed if I can find it. Still it was well written and although it was akin to watching a car crash you did have me hooked till the end - well done - Diane"
8 months ago

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