Short Story: A Blue/green Hue Over Life

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Katie Celeste


Sometimes the past can be relived and become the future.


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From the outside, the house seems quaint. A sweet little cottage surrounded by a canopy of trees and a white picket fence.

He follows the cobblestone path to the front door; He has a good feeling about this place, it seems like the ideal home to raise a family in. He's done his research and knows it's close to schools, and town, but he never anticipated the sense of privacy and seclusion the house has. 'This is it!' he thinks excitedly before he follows the agent across the threshold.

He wanders around the property eagerly, the house seems to have a warmth all of it's own. The agent guides him on his tour, however there's one door that remains closed, one area left unseen. 'What's in here?' he asks the agent as he reaches for the handle.

The agent's mood and manner abruptly changes, 'Oh, that's just another room,' he replies in a low whisper, watching apprehensively as Todd pushes open the door.

Todd…

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Julian Fields said "A nice creepy premise, but I agree with Jay -the story could have been developed more. It was too short! And if the mysterious room was so terrible, couldn't it have been redecorated and have had new windows fitted?"
6 months ago
Jay Leffew said "So why doesn't he say, "Don't go in there!"? At least he would have made the effort to stop them; - explain before the fact...? I realise people won't be put off like that, but at least he could've tried each time? I like the creepiness, but would've liked more to the story."
6 months ago

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