Short Story: A Black Cat

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James Apps


A young girl gives a cat a name that really doesn't fit.


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My mother brought the black kitten home on my thirteenth birthday. It was completely black. The only splash of colour was its pink tongue and green eyes and from the moment she carried it inside it was obvious she was mother’s cat.

“Give her a name dearie,” mother said, adding a cackle.

“Mother, you don’t have to speak in that funny voice or cackle with me. I’m your daughter, remember?”

“Yes, yes dearie, but be so kind as to name an old woman’s pussy-cat,” she said with yet another cackle. I sighed and search as I could for something suitably different. The only name that tumbled out of my head was, “Tiddles”.

I’ll give mother her due, she wasn’t fazed at all and looked at me steadily, nodded and said, “Tiddles it is then.”

It came as a shock when I realised she had taken me seriously and, mother being mother, had adopted my suggestion. The kitten glared at me…

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Susan Donim said "Confused Tense - I really enjoyed this story and felt it was overall well written. I just felt the tense was slightly confused, and was unsure of when things where actually happening due to this. A few of the sentences were also slightly muddled. Overall though I did think it was a good read. And on a separate note, I've really enjoyed reading A Dish of Mince for Polly and The Director, both kept me very entertained! "
3 years ago

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