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A HAPPY CHRISTMAS

The Christmas lights that decorated Cape Town’s main street twinkled like colourful neon stars. It looked magical. And in the dark of night when you stand at the very top of the street, up by the government Gardens and stared down towards Table Bay, it looked like fairyland.

Jissie, its pretty,’ whispered Jan Appel.

Tinkie, his companion for many years, agreed. He glanced across at her. Once she’d been beautiful. Even though her eyes were yellowed these days, they still reminded him of warm, dark chocolate.

He hadn’t had anything to offer her, no job, no home, but Tinkie hadn’t minded. She said she would follow him anywhere and that she loved him, then she’d chuckled and said, ‘An’ your lekker voice, Jan.’

Tugging on his arm, she said, ‘I’m hungry – let’s go … you can sing for the touris’.

Jan nodded, ‘Ja, jis’ like always. An’ this time, I gotta feeling we gonna make lotsa money, then we can buy me…

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Patsy R Liles said "Morality? That is the question. In the US, had two such persons found a wallet, they would have emptied it of the cash and sped away with caution. Because if they had been moral and taken it to the nearest police man, they would have been immediately arrested, charged with theft and put in a miserable crowded jail where they could lose further hope of any Christmas. And where they would have learned of easier ways to get the dop and that a new dress would not be needed in the prison laundry. If they were fortunate, they would be appointed a state barrister and sent to prison, or put on probation for theft. Their situation in life would be prejudged. No matter where we live, there is injustice and will be until those of us who know morality want it to reign, and make it so....a formidable task. Had an innocent small child been the finder, taken it to mummie or daddy, who in turn would have turned it over to authorities, the wallet would have been returned to the owner who then celebrated a fine Christmas. HMMM Wonderful expose, Bernice. We can only hope that in time all that will have gone away. Wishful thinking? I hope not. Regards, Patsy R Liles"
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Oh, I agree with you Diane and Patsy - the internet is wonderful; connecting us all to each other as though we were merely neighbours. Yes, there are some of us here in deepest darkest Africa who still have morals and values, but unfortunately the way the world has become with everyone wanting everything instantly, crime seems to be the way most are going. It's easier to steal than to work for your money. However, I do think over here it is much worse than anywhere else in the civilized world. Our crime has soared out of control over the past 20 odd years - that is why many South Africans have ventured overseas for greener and safer pastures. But not me ... I love South Africa, warts and all, and love telling stories about our people, okay they're all 'tall' tales, but still I love trying to describe the people and the landscape as best I can. And although I can trace part of my ancestry back to 1657 when the first Dutch settlers arrived at the Cape, and later because of my English ancestors who arrived here in the early twentieth century. Yet there are still those in my country who view me as European because I am not the colour or share the culture of the majority of our people! We are still viewed as 'settlers' - can you imagine? Nonetheless, I am South African, African, just that I happen to belong to another 'tribe' that makes up this beautiful, special country of mine."
6 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "I agree, Diane, the internet has graced me with the nicest of experiences, you all at Shortbreadstories. All we need is a good cup of tea, but then it would be different times in our part of the world so not quiet like tea time. Africa is still a baby though ancient in history. It looks to me in pictures to be a uniquely beautiful place. I too, hope that they can avoid this attitude of 'just because you are different, we see you as criminal.' Fortunately throughout the world society is not in that mind-set, or life would be unbearable. We have stories in the news everyday about one or two good persons having returned something of value. But the tendency to 'finder's keepers' wanes on. I recon that wherever we have humanity, we will find good and bad. I try to imagine a world without the bad, but it becomes a fantasy. Goodness, journalism owes the world an apology, doesn't it? I wonder why the negative sells more newspapers --- Patsy"
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "First of all I want to say don't you love the internet. That we can all chat like this is amazing. If it wasn't for the internet I would never have met you or probably anyone living in Africa or found out all these truths. Secondly you say it is like in the wild but you say this when you have just told a wonderful tale of morality, honesty and gratitude and so let us just thank heavens (or whoever) for that and hope that the little kernel of civilised behaviour can grow and flourish, with good honest people such as yourself around surely there should be a chance. Funny isn't it, we in the west think of many parts of the Eastern World as fairly lawless but when we were living in Saudi Arabia in the eighties it was absolutely true that you could drop your wallet in the road and if you went back two days later it would still be there untouched. I don't know what it's like now but hope that is still the same."
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Actually, Diane, a similar thing happened with me. We had guests from New Zealand slmody 15 years ago staying with us and on their last night in Cape Town went to the Waterfront and found a wallet. They didn't have time to find the owner and handed the wallet over to me. Inisde the wallet was the owner's name and the company he worked for. I have to be perfectly honest, there was R700,00 inside and at that time we were struggling financially and I was tempted to keep the money. But I just couldn't and after a few phone calls to the company's Johannesburg head office, got his phone number, called him and he arranged for someone he knew in Cape Town to fetch it from my house. I did get a reward, a beautiful bouquet of flowers. Glad I got some sort of debate going ... hehehe .... But you know, living in Africa is very tough and sometimes it's like in the wild, survival of the fittest .... every man for himself - awful, but true."
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "I do agree that prevailing conditions have a great deal of sway on the "moral" behaviour of citizens. When my children were little we were very, very short of money and I remember one day wondering this very thing, what would I do if I found a purse. Well no matter which way I looked at it I am still convinced in my own mind that I would return it if at all possible. Ironically though a few days later I left my own purse in the children's pram while I took them to the baby clinic. Guess what - yup - It was stolen. Well done Bernice on sparking this debate I love it when this happens with one of the stories and we connect across the world."
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thank you so much Patsy for the read and comment. I am thrulled that you liked my little tale of the 'down-trodden'. Sadly, this is the way the world is and becoming more so these days. Once again, thank you! Bernice."
6 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Even with the money still intact? Surely not! I once saw £20 notes blowing freely around a concourse in a busy town; began gathering them up saying loudly, "I'll leave these at Sainsbury's, and hope the owner thinks to ask. . . . . All around me people picked up the rest of the money and handed it to me! Do I have an honest face? I guess so, - and three weeks later Sainsb's 'phoned me to say a reward had been left for me. I can't believe Britain is the only place where such things still happen..."
6 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Hi Diane. How lovely for your daughter. That happens here in 'polite society' very often. It is the downtroden that seem to be falling into the category 'guilty until proven innocent' these days. So much twisting of the laws, getting one off for good behavior, and such. Since the US began taking prayer out of government and schools, we appear to be on a collision course with good and evil. Church attendance is down. Leadership is corrupting in some places. It seems to be a disease that is spreading around the world, and one can only hold one's course and try to stay steady I suppose. I believe that the moral shame lies in the fact that we have to have such conditions as these two were experiencing. Big problem in society....God Bless. -Patsy"
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "WOW that's interesting isn't it. I think it's fairly true to say that in the UK what stops the finder taking the wallet to the police is the worry that the funds may find their way into the Police Benevolent fund. Having said that there is a crime in the UK, stealing by finding but I doubt you would end up in jail for it. Now then, not long ago my daughter and I did indeed find a wallet. We are much more fortunate than the poor homeless people in this story but we did indeed take the wallet in - but to the bank, there was cheque and paying in book inside the wallet. The bank insisted on taking our names and the outcome was that the owner of the wallet had their property back, we had a warm glow anticipating their delight and a few days later my daughter received a very generous and unlooked for financial reward. I suppose that is the real happy ending we could all hope for in a kinder world."
6 months ago
Jay Leffew said "I guess morality is a luxury such people don't even consider. Would there have been a reward of they'd done the right thing? I don't like it, but from my pedestal it is hard to fathom some rights and wrongs; suffice it to say this isn't the ending I would've chosen."
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thanks for the read and comment, Jay."
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Do you know I am not sure how I feel about this ending. I will be very interested to read further comments - many thanks though - Diane"
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thank you, Diane. Yes, sadly, a lot of my stories show the ugly side of life. As for A HAPPY CHRISTMAS, that is what I wanted to show. Here in South Africa there is so much poverty and the gap betweeen the haves and have-nots is enormous. I think more than half of our population are unemployed, hence finding the wallet, there was no way they were going to return it. Besides that, thank you so much for reading my story and commenting on it. I truly appreciate your time. All the best Bernice"
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Oh yes I understood the meaning and thought that the message that sometimes it is the small things that make the biggest difference. Unfortunately we have homeless people here too a disgrace in a so called evolved and civilised country but there you are. I also realise that your story was probably very truthful and realistic but there is a teeny bit of me that is uncomfortable with your characters keeping the wallet rather than returning it to the owners - or at least trying to. I know that probably wouldn't happen (sadly). Anyway it was a very well written and colourful story which painted a vivid picture of a difficult way of living and I do wish you the best of luck with it."
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Hi Diane, I think the ending just goes to show that even if you're down-and-out doesn't mean you need huge dreams, all he wanted was his alcohol and she a new dress for Christmas. Over here we call the homeless people 'bergies', they are a sub-culture in Cape Town. And for these 'bergies', Jan and Tienkie, there is always a ray of light shining somewhere and theirs was finding the wallet. Well, that's what the ending was meant to portray. Thanks for the read."
6 months ago
Adam West said "Quite an odd little offering - did not end as I expected, which is good. Always good to see plenty of dialogue - many thanks and good luck, Adam."
6 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Thanks Adam ..."
6 months ago

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