Short Story: Remembrance

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Martin Thaggis


A stranger calls at a remote ‘Bed and Breakfast’ in the Cotswolds, on a cold, dark and damp November night.


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An old thatched cottage stands huddled at the bend of a long lane, and its ‘Bed and Breakfast’ sign beckons the weary traveller. It is a small sign, an old sign, and a sign that has seen brighter days. It is now but a dim glow of its former self, set against the black silhouettes and shadows of the heavy leaning trees, but the sign still calls out to the still of the night.

Footsteps crunch hard into gravel, and splash into unseen puddles of the unlit lane. Someone approaches. Long plumes of breath push high into the chill night air, as the figure nears. A doorbell rings loudly inside the hallway of the thatched cottage. Out beyond the hedge-line, an owl casts a lonely call through the skeletal trees, and moments later a dim light fills the leaded windows of a small porch.

A door opens…

“Yes…?”

“…Oh! …Good evening… madam. Do you have a room? I’m, I’m sorry it’s a little late,…

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Jane Bailey said "Sort of picking up where you left of.lol."
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Somehow you just know this will be a 'Hotel California' situation from the start. Well written fun. Get out of that, eh George?"
2 years ago

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