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Richard Ardus said "Maysam, I also found this to be a confusing read! You might think about writing something then leaving it alone for a day. When you come back to it you may see ways to move words, sentences and paragraphs around to make more sense and add new elements, perhaps. This approach works for me. I think it's important to refine and edit carefully - then any reader can read without the distraction of errors and give their full attention to what you want to say. Keep writing man!!"
12 months ago
Maysam Kandej replied saying "Thank you, dear Richard. Yes, you're right. I should work harder. I should be much more careful about what I write, and I should keep writing. Thanks for encouraging and telling me "Keep writing man!!". I really appreciate that! Thanks :)"
12 months ago

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