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This comment was originally left on the short story October, 31th, All Hallows’ Evening, 2013 Vol. 2.

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Jay Leffew said "It's probably me, but again I think I've missed something, and it could be because you aren't familiar with the English language. I have a feeling that last paragraph is a deep observation, but I don't know why. It just seems hard to follow what you are trying to convey, and therefore to understand the conclusion. . . . . I think you probably have some very interesting observations to put across and don't know how, but I wonder if they are 'Short Stories' as such? I would like to explore the paranormal more in what you write, but somehow you just seem to miss the importance of having mentioned it, and leave it behind as just a passing problem which doesn't need going into, when in fact it is the most interesting aspect of your writing. . . . . It is possible you think you are conveying more on that level, and that the lack of knowledge on how to write it in English is the problem. I am intrigued by the possibilities here, but very frustrated in trying to follow them through."
12 months ago
Martin Norberg replied saying "My account was romoved, I asked them to do that so I could update my stories in the editing queue."
12 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Ah! Well, I'm losing my sense of time as I age; some things I would swear were fresh enough to be only weeks ago, yet turn out to've been months, even years ago, but at least I wasn't wrong in thinking I'd read it before, - I was just puzzled as to where the original went, along with the comment I imagine I made at the time..."
12 months ago
Martin Norberg replied saying "Thank you for reading and the comment. You have read this story before but not a year ago, a couple of months ago."
12 months ago

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