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Jay Leffew said "I rather missed the action I've come to expect from Jackass. Somehow it doesn't seem right that she should become a tame little negotiator, allbeit using a tranquilliser gun to gain her ends. . . . . To be honest Trudy seems pretty superfluous here too, I really would've appreciated some action which made her backup necessary... Didn't quite hit the spot this time I'm afraid but I liked the revelations. Bigotry, especially in so called Christians, is a real problem the world over, and this was a nice solution."
12 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks, Jay...wrote this one while conducting an interview for a friend and I guess I really shouldnt have...lesson learned, I hope. Thanks for stopping by, promise better next time! Bless!"
12 months ago

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